Parallelism in writing refers to using grammatical structures that are similar in form or pattern. It can be a useful stylistic tool to create a sense of balance and rhythm in your writing. However, in academic writing, overusing parallelism can make your text monotonous and predictable and, therefore, should be avoided.
To avoid excessive parallelism, try to vary the structure of your sentences and use a mix of different grammatical constructions. You can achieve this by incorporating different types of clauses (dependent and independent) and using various verb forms and sentence lengths.
Additionally, it is essential to pay attention to the content of your writing to avoid unintentional repetition. One way to do this is to make sure that each sentence has a special message and contributes to the overall argument of your text. Varying your vocabulary and sentence structure can also help you avoid repeatedly using the exact words or phrases.
Finally, consider having someone else read your text and provide feedback on its overall flow and structure. A fresh perspective can help you identify areas where your writing may be too parallel and suggest ways to improve it.
Benjamin L. Stewart 